You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Education is the backbone of any country, and in most countries, It is the private educational system which is doing the heavy lifting.
Although
, I am of a belief that education should be free,
thus
funding public schools should be promoted, I understand the importance of private schools and support its funding too.
This
essay will
further
discuss
this
position. There are several reasons, why governments should fund the other schools along with supporting the public ones.
Firstly
, It is the motivation. Since private schools are purely profit oriented businesses, they have more reasons to improve their standards and in most cases are far better equipped than the public ones.
For example
, in my case, the school I went to in my time did not have a computer lab.
However
, It was not the case when my youngest cousin recently joined the same school. Meanwhile, the public schools in my hometown still use the methods
from
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of
my parents' time.
Secondly
, the governments cannot meet the demand. It is practically impossible for the governments
to have
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have
enough public schools to fulfil the entire country's education needs.
For instance
, a recent study from the DAWN reports that the trend in population growth in the city of Karachi requires more than 39000 schools by 2025. While it currently is just a little shy of having 35000
schools of
Accept comma addition
schools, of
which only 2000 are public.
Therefore
, authorities look up to the
entraprenours
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
entrepreneur
to cover the gap.
Similarly
,
entraprenours
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
relay
have confidence or faith in
rely
on
insentives
a positive motivational influence
incentives
and funding to start new schools. In conclusion, private schools may not provide free education and come across as profit hungry businesses, but these are
essentional
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
for providing better
eduaction
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
and reaching all the corners of the country.
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