Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families and spend less time entertaining themselves outside, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that young people should spend more free

time

to stay close to their families while others say that it is better to do whatever they like. In my opinion,

although

spending

time

for families is important, but take the leisure

time

to enjoy

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

is

also

virtual. Young people should manage their schedules to balance everything. On the one hand, everyone is always busy with their job in daily life and just have a little

time

for their family, so it suddenly creates a widened space in communication and connection with each other.

Therefore

, when they have free

time

, they use it to connect and show their appreciation with people who raised them. I believed that family is the place that can teach you a manner of the lesson and keep you safe.

For instance

, my family

usually visit

Suggestion

usually visits

grandparent whenever we are free to have

dinner which

Accept comma addition

dinner, which

can create a strong connection between us

On the other hand

,

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

believed that young children should enjoy

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

outside,

this

is because it is a great opportunity for the young to go out and learn new things which can give them the energy and knowledge.

Furthermore

, they can

also

learn and practice social skills which can serve future careers and lead them to success easily.

For example

, according to the

ShengHai

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Shanghai

survey that young people who often learn from the social will become more productive, gain more knowledge, and make a new connection with other than people just stay home. In conclusion,

although

spending

time

entertaining

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

can help them adapt to the job easily, but the valuable manner lesson which is taught by parents is

also

important. I think young people should manage their schedule to balance and control their life