If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these
days, whether staying jobless or working intensively has aroused Change preposition
These
people
’s discussion. In my opinion, while
I agree that people
would choose to live without work for many benefits, I believe that others would prefer spending too much time
working in
their growth for equally important factors.
On the one hand, I agree that a Change preposition
on
life
without working will give people
plenty of time
to take care of themselves. For example
, people
will not have to try to get work done on time
or think about problems that need solving at work. They can spend that time
working out in order to prevent pains
and diseases. Fix the agreement mistake
pain
Furthermore
, people
will be able to have opportunities to strengthen their relationship
and broaden their horizons in my way. Take Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
family
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the family
for instance
, if family members have sufficient time
to bond together, they can share thoughts and interests, take care together and also
sharpen the family.
On the other hand
, I believe that others are in favour of the idea that a life
spending too much time
working is of great benefit to their life
. If people
spent a lot of time
working, they would earn much
money so that they Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
can
meet their basic needs. Wrong verb form
could
For example
, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people
consider it a priority to earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life
. Moving further
, the living standard of our societies can grow dramatically, if each citizen can give a hand to contribute to economic sustainable development. For example
, in Japan
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Japan,
people
spend most of their time
working, which leads to the fact that in recent years, this
country is one of the most developed countries in the world.
In conclusion, while
living not working is the choice of many for its advantages, I believe that spending a lot of time
working is also
equally valuable. Therefore
, base
on their own background and visions, Wrong verb form
based
people
need to take this
problem into consideration... before reaching to
the final decisionChange preposition
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