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In order to be successful in sport, some people think that you have to be physically strong. Others say mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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For getting success in
sport
, some people claim that sportsmen should have physical strength, while for others it is crucial to be mentally strong. In
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I would like to observe both views and to determine my opinion. Looking at the
first
 statement, it becomes obvious that it is really hard to gain any success and achievements in
sport
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competetions
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competitions
competition
 without physical health and strength.
Sometime
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Sometimes
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 people get the talent for running or playing football or volleyball from their birth and it is easier for
this
 kind of people to become
a champions
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a champion
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 and to win in different competitions, games. It happens just because of the fact that their
bobies
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bodies
babies
 are more adaptable and ready for different hard physical activities and
trainings
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.
That is
 why it does not require
from
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them to destroy their health and body limits for overcoming some records.
On the other hand
, other people are absolutely sure that there
are
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 no success in
s
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port without mental health. It is impossible to
disagre
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disagree
 with
this
 point of view as quite often during different competitions and games it requires from sportsmen to be emotionally stable and calm. There is no chance for people with
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eak nervous system to survive in
this
 competitive environment.
Moreover
,
sportic
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sports
 people should have
i
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an
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ron will and endless wish and love for what they do. Without the mentioned compounds it is really
compicated
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complicated
 not to break under external
preasure
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pressure
 and difficulties and not to lose
interst
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interest
 to chosen kind of
sport
. To sum up, I absolutely agree that it is impossible to gain great achievements with weak physical abilities.
Nevertheless
, the most important for sportsmen it is to be mentally strong as only inside themselves
peopel
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people
 can find the
second
 breath and power to move on and overcome external and internal difficulties and obstacles.
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