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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training program to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organizer. Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows:

#minutes #month #program #uk #head #course #participants #events #organizer #interest #role #information
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter regarding your requirement for social
events
’ organizer from the participants. I was so happy that you are not hiring someone from outside anyways, I am going to attend your training in Central London UK, and I am there for a month. I would like to organize your social
events
 there.
In addition
 to that could you please send me
further
 information with brief details of the
events
, you want to organize, so
accordingly
 I will plan and submit a blueprint of the project before actually doing anything on it in real. Along with that, I did not inform you earlier, I am organizing
events
 since my college days, I was head of
events
 in university throughout the academic term. I have organized many festival
events
at
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in
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public
Correct article usage
the public
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 domain on a large scale, I believe, I am enough capable to handle the responsibilities and duties effectively and efficiently. With best regards
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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