Modern lifestyle is one of the big issues in likely to abandon their child rather than leave their duties in work for a full of advice and trustworthy people . children are jailed due to illegal activities that they have done.
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trend makes some disadvantages for children. One problem is mental health. Children that likely to be alone has to bear the problems by theirself, it means they have to manage their feelings. Linking Words
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