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Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?

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In these days, that the offenders who are known to re-offend after being released from prison have aroused people’s discussion.
Although
 the problems associated with
this
 situation could be pronounced, they are not without feasible solutions.
Firstly
, people’s prejudice to the criminals beyond dispute trigger
this undesirable problems
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. In fact, there is an obvious bias against prisoners from several individuals who are not willing to provide career opportunities for community reintegration persons.
As a result
, they could be out of
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ob, have plenty of free time and not earn a living, which pushes them to a dead end so that they have to steal and do illegal work.
In addition
,
although
 prisoners blend over backwards to opt for a job, they lack necessary skills
such
 as teamwork skills, problem-solving and specialised knowledge into the bargain;
therefore
, it is convinced that businesses would have hard trouble re-training new human resources. Eventually, offenders would not adapt to society and go back to crime to earn a living for themselves and their family.
Nevertheless
, the problem above could be remedied if some of the following preparatory steps are taken. One solution, in the prison, vocational training should be taken place in order to ensure the prisoners after being free could make a living by sweated labour work. Another one, the government should raise people’s awareness through long-term education and national campaigns, not for the negative attitudes of society but there are more potential wrongdoers. In conclusion,
although
 the important reasons for the rate of re-offending have become a dilemma, some holistic approaches should be adopted. Only when concerted endeavours are made by the government and individuals can
this
 thorny issue be resolved perfectly.
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