Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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uggest young people to continue studying at institutions or college.
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echnical profession could increase the level of employment as these positions could offer to Add an article
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ounger generation, especially for those are not good at studying academic knowledge since these occupations do not require educational qualification. Add an article
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, technical occupations play an important role to steady the regular life for citizens. Car owners, Linking Words
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a professional worker around. What’s more, these neglected issues could affect the sense of well-being of the citizens as they live in communities with huge inconvenient.
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, I believed that juveniles should attend college for expanding their educational level. Linking Words
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is because they could be easier to obtain a higher salary position than those just simply finished high school courses. Linking Words
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, a managerial position usually is qualified with a bachelor degree above. Linking Words
In addition
, a high-quality talent pool could guarantee countries to boost the economy due to these people are the core competitiveness to make a country greater than others. Top talents could generate their experiences and knowledge to facilitate industry development, particularly in science, healthcare and technology field and these talents could be cultivated by universities or college.
In conclusion, education is one of the most important propositions for juveniles which could possibly impact their direction of life path. Linking Words
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the reason I believe that to motivate them to Linking Words
further
higher education or attend university could lead them to gain a brighten future.Linking Words
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