Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about how young generations to make their choice between

further

academic development and start

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as auto mechanics or constructor for community contribution. While

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echnical occupation is beneficial to community progress, I agree with those

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uggest young people to continue studying at institutions or college.

Firstly

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echnical profession could increase the level of employment as these positions could offer to

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ounger generation, especially for those are not good at studying academic knowledge since these occupations do not require educational qualification.

Secondly

, technical occupations play an important role to steady the regular life for citizens. Car owners,

for instance

, could suffer if their vehicles could not be fixed on time just because there is no

such

a professional worker around. What’s more, these neglected issues could affect the sense of well-being of the citizens as they live in communities with huge inconvenient.

However

, I believed that juveniles should attend college for expanding their educational level.

This

is because they could be easier to obtain a higher salary position than those just simply finished high school courses.

For example

, a managerial position usually is qualified with a bachelor degree above.

In addition

, a high-quality talent pool could guarantee countries to boost the economy due to these people are the core competitiveness to make a country greater than others. Top talents could generate their experiences and knowledge to facilitate industry development, particularly in science, healthcare and technology field and these talents could be cultivated by universities or college. In conclusion, education is one of the most important propositions for juveniles which could possibly impact their direction of life path.

That is

the reason I believe that to motivate them to

further

higher education or attend university could lead them to gain a brighten future.