Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Tradition

is the virtual values that had been pass through generation, from the oldest to the youngest. Some people think that

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oung generation should follow the traditional values. Meanwhiles, others argue that they need to have a

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of behaviour. From my perspective.

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having the freestyle of behaviour is one of the best way to adapt with modern environment,

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and following the

tradition

values can teach a well-mannered

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for individuals On the one hand, the

tradition

is the old

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and experience from the previous people earned and improved so it has it owns moral advantages. To be specific, these values can bring a source of manner

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and teach you how to have well-behaved to other people.

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, in my country, children from 3 years old are taught to respect other people from the older to younger ones.

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will make a strong connection in their family and

also

in their social life.

On the other hand

, some people argue that children should be free to behave.

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is because

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oung generation is living in the modern world which is surrounding by technology and science,

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completely different from the previous time and ancient people, so the old culture and outdated

tradition

will not suitable.

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, if the children follow the

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way too much, it can be hard for them to adapt

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environment.

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, children are more flexible with technology lead to gain knowledge about the world and adapt

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the change easily than the previous people. In conclusion. the young need to make a decision and have a freestyle in behaviour. Traditional values can give them

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good

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about manner but they should collect what is the ones suitable

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them and

stituation

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