Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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letter, to apply for the part-time teaching voluntary program in your museum related to computers, about the advertisement listed in

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week's local newspaper. I'

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always interested to work for the social cause, and it is because of the inspiration drawn from a book, about the life of Mother Teresa, who dedicated her entire life to support people, who required assistance. Now, I got the perfect opportunity to do my social service, and I, do not want to miss it. I have completed my master's in Computer sciences, and

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proficient in complex mathematical calculations.

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currently working as a teacher in the Spartans school of technology. Since I already have the teaching experience, it will be easier for me to educate the participants about computers. I'

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available, during the weekends from 1 pm to 5 pm. I, kindly request to accept my application, and it will be my honour, to serve the community with

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program as my

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one, and not

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. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Arunkumar Balakrishnan

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Insomnia
Sleep deprivation
Sleep disorders
Sleep quality
Fatigue
Exhaustion
Restless
Restorative sleep
REM sleep
Circadian rhythm
Sleep hygiene
Napping
Sleep duration
Melatonin
Sleep-inducing
Drowsiness
Sleep disturbances
Obstructive sleep apnea
Snoring
Sleepwalking
Sleep talking
Shift work
Sleeping pills
Sleep aid
Relaxation techniques
Meditation
Deep breathing

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think the typical teaching of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. Do you agree or disagree?

In most countries, prison is the most common solution when people commit a crime. However, if they were to receive better education, it could prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that education is important to get jobs while others believe it its experience and skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.