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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Human culture across the ages are using capital
punishment
 to demonstrated your power and sense of justice
,
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 but isn´t fair
then
 appears. Groups of people have a critical opinion about capital
punishment
 and they support an idea that isn´t necessary.
In contrast
, other relevant groups are convinced that
this
 is a solution for most serious crimes.
This
 essay respects both views, but we understand that our society doesn´t create a fair system and clear criteria to use capital
punishment
 and because
this
 is impossible to apply it nowadays. For all crimes is necessary a judge to make your considerations and define one of
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erdict. But, how fair and correct is
this
 evaluation? Poor regions and black people don´t have correct information about hight, cases and don´t have access to layers and justice system.
This
 situation creates a social gap
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an unfair environment when the criminal court exams a crime case.
For instance
, without good layer support is impossible to revert one unfair decision to set capital
punishment
.
On the other hand
, one way that "the State" have to prove your power and give examples to society is capital
punishment
.
This
 mechanism provides fear and terrible feelings in everyone. The fear strategy helps the police to reduce criminal incidents. There are many cases to prove that states with capital
punishment
 have fewer crime rates
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 others without it. To conclude, capital
punishment
 is a very complicated and polemic subject. Is important to observe how real impact about
this
 in our nation, in special in the states that adopt it as a tool to reduce your criminal rates. But, in my opinion, until our world is able to prove fair access to a justice system for all citizens is impossible to consider capital
punishment
 good options to reduce crime rates.
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