Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy thing. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both these and give your own opinion.

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In recent year, the question of whether the problem of advertising or is so common has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Both pros and cons will be analyzed. It should be started with obvious advantages that advertising provided some convenient things for customers or the company.

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, Since somethings advertised by the company, that can bring

product

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information to customers. In fact that, when the

product

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is advertised, the buyer will know what is

this

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product

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, how to use it, and whether it is suitable for them or not, which helps the customers choose and buy any

product

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, by attracting users through advertising, bringing images of products to customers.

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means that the

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has quality, interesting content, demonstrate true experience, and

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that will appeal to the buyer, which will help them remember the

product

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for a long time.

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, it would be incomplete without the discussion of advertising increasingly popular that we no longer pay attention to it.

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, in order to know the

product

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, the company usually use

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dvertise

indiscriminate

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indiscriminately

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, today, there is so much advertising for somethings, they advertise in all sorts of ways but do not know if customers want to see it like “ giving out of leaflets” there is no saving in the user’s memory.

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, if the

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is not true, it will lead to destruction.

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means that many companies just want to advertise to sell goods, advertising false information,

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happened so much that they thought the

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was something to ordinary and boring. In conclusion,

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both trends have their own arguments,

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I hold the belief that advertising still has an impact on customers and persuasive for buyers. By focusing on investing the quality of

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, renew the

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, that will be better.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

302 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy thing. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both these and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

Some people think that we learn best through in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom. Others believe that online learning is more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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