In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For decades, people are dying because of poor eating habits.

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, some people think if authorities increase tax will solve the problem, I tend to disagree with

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perspective because it will not make people change their habits.

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, people need to learn more about good eating habits to make people concerned about their

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of all, the

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has to provide information about the damage which

junk

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food

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can make in our population. Most of the people know some information about the damage that bad eating habits can make, but I strongly believe that it is just superficial and the

government

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needs to work more on that, and

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provide knowledge about

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food

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and how people can change the eating habits to have a better quality of life. I strongly believe that neither if the

government

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increase the

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food

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tax, people will not let to buy. When a person makes a habit it is hard to take off, it does not matter the

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and neither the difficulty to buy, people will find a way to buy either if they do not have the money.

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,

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maybe will just make the population angry with the

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making protest on the internet against the higher

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of the products.

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, people need to be concern about

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and what they eat.

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, if I say to my wife that she cannot eat

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food

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because of the higher

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, she will not listen to me because

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is not a reason to not buy. But if I say for her that she cannot buy

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food

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because

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has been killing a lot of people in the world and we have a better choice that which it is very delicious and the same

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, maybe she will listen to me and start to buy

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. To conclude, increase

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food

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tax will not solve the problem and what we need is to make people be concern about their life and their

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.

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, it is very difficult to change people mind and the

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needs to work with a good base of knowledge to provide for people.