The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. 
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The thought of one career is getting archived into people’s mind, whilst new trending option is having multiple jobs for earning money as well as learning while working will help people throughout life. I completely agree with

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statement, as human are evolving day by day competitiveness is getting increased and to survive in

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environment , continuous learning and diversified careers are necessary.

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paragraph I will give some explanations and examples about how people have failed if they are putting all eggs in one basket while

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econd paragraph will talk about getting your hands dirty with multiple job options and daily learning to improve logical and analytical ability. The people depending on a single career are always at risk, nowadays due to improvements and upgrades,the majority of jobs are becoming obsolete after some time. Every organization is trying to save money by removing people and introducing robots for monotonous jobs.

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, when IBM introduced its robot Watson many telecallers, reception jobs were gone due to the introduction of newer technology. The single job will

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make you feel outdated as well as not competitive in today’s market. While

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people having multiple careers and upgrading themselves with gradual learning are at the peak point of career because they keep changing their options and rotating themselves according to what employer needs.

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help in increasing focus , i.e. adjusting timelines and understanding what requires in the market today to run business. The diversifying focus will

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help to maintain work & life balance , as you don’t have the stress of job security . Continual learning

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helps in the development of the brain, so that you don’t feel outdated anytime and can switch gears every time when your office asks for. For e.g. recently we have seen how Elon Musk keeps enhancing his business from cars to neurological devices , due to his keen to learn and problem-solving attitude will help him succeed in his life. To conclude, people having multiple options in careers and continuous learning process will give multiple routes for starting their new position or business from any point.