You are planning to go on a holiday in an English-speaking country where one of your friend resides. Please write him a letter and let him know about the upcoming trip. In your letter; - Ask for recommendations for place to visit during your trip. - Ask about accommodations. - Advice on program that you and your friend can do together once you will meet him

Dear Jay, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and
best
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of spirits. I am writing to let you know about my upcoming trip to Canada. Actually, I have 15 days of vacation applies
next
month and I am planning to visit your country between September 15th to 28th September. Let me explain my situation,
this
will be my
first
visit to
the
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foreign country and
personally
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I don't know much more about it. It will be really helpful if you provide me
some
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information regarding Canadian culture and few tourist places. I am
also
wondering about the accommodation and
also
give me advice about stay near
tourist
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place. So I can easily manage everything over there. Would you kindly, able to take days off at that time. Because I wanna spend some quality of time with you. We can
also
enjoy some of your favourite water activities on the beach and enjoy farries. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Lovingly, RUSHI
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