Question- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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museums are hotly debated in popular media across the world.

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many might consider it to be

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negative,

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extremely beneficial not only in terms of boosting the economy of a country but

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in terms of maintaining the

museums

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structure.

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essay will explore how these mega advantages have the potential to outshine any drawback. There are multiple advantages

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advancement.

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,a major benefit associated with

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evolution is the growth in

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conomy after charging the museums.Revenue generated

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of charging the museums will increase the economical growth of a country.Take an example of Sweden,where a lot of money has been used for investment after applying the

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for museums.

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,finances generated

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of museums

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will expand the

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country's

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economy.

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,another major merit linked to

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evolution is the maintenance cost of the museums.Museums will generate their own revenue which can be spent on

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maintaining

their structure and the staff salary.

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,the famous Monte Carlo museum in Italy ,a leading example of preserving its unique

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architecture

because of charging

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ee on admission.

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,

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ee of museums can be used for its

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maintenance

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,the only minor drawback that I can relate to

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development is the

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discourage

of people belonging to low a socioeconomic background, as they

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can't

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afford to pay the

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problem can be more than compensated by applying discounts monthly or annually. To sum up,I believe that the advantages of

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development in terms of economical growth and preserving the maintenance cost have the potential to outweigh any disadvantage.