You are going on a short training course at a college in Sydney, Australia. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it Write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write any address.

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Dear Mr Walker, I am writing with regards to the vacancy available on campus for apartment No.235. I have applied for

Hackathon

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the Hackathon

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workshop at

University

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the University

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of Sydney which will take place for 4 weeks starting

September

2nd to

September

29th. I am planning to arrive on

September

1st so that I prepare myself beforehand for the workshop. Because I am planning to stay closer to the campus, I would like to ensure a few details that I will need while staying. I saw the listing online and was astonished to see the place was massive, neat, and clean. But the apartment does not include a heater and Wi-Fi service which was a little disappointing. As we know, it will start to get colder

month, I would like to book a place which includes a heater as I want my stay to be comfortable.

Besides

, having an internet connection is one of the most important things because I will need it for studying. I will

also

be away from my family so it is one of the necessary things that I will need. I was wondering if it would be possible to install both

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things before

September

1st as I am tentatively planning to arrive that day. My bookings are yet to be done so please let me know as soon as you confirm the maintenance. Looking forward to receiving your response. Yours sincerely, Jasdeep

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