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Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad, and give your own opinion about whether it is a good idea.

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In
this
 contemplate era, most of the students prefer to study abroad rather than studying in local universities.
Although
 it is better for their overall growth and development, it can be quite expensive. Here in the essay below, I will explain both pros and cons of studying abroad and will provide my opinion. To start with, there are primarily two advantages to studying abroad.
Firstly
, it will improve the  The confidence level of young students. As by studying abroad they will learn to live out of their comfort zone and
also
 away from their parents which will teach them to solve their own problems and will enhance their decision-making skills that will eventually lead to their confidence.
Secondly
, it will definitely turn their overall growth and development. By studying with students of different culture and language it will improve their communication skills that are the requirement to work with any multinational company.
For example
, a student having knowledge of more than
one
 culture and language will be prefered
first
 rather than the
one
 who has knowledge of only
one
 culture or language .
On the contrary
,
although
 there are many merits of studying out of the nation, some drawbacks still exist. As it is well known how expensive it is to study in a different country! Sometimes it is very hard for a student to pay off the student loans they took for their education and a family who is earning just bread butter can not afford to send their child to study abroad.
As a result
, it becomes a burden on them.
In addition
, fewer health facilities are provided to the students from other countries for that in case of serious illness or disease it becomes difficult for students to survive. In conclusion, I would stay no doubt there are some drawbacks of studying abroad but still, The advantages are more superior than the disadvantages as with overall career growth and development
one
 can solve the financial problems later it becomes worthy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic excellence
  • career prospects
  • cultural exposure
  • global perspective
  • networking opportunities
  • personal growth
  • financial burden
  • tuition fees
  • living expenses
  • travel costs
  • homesickness
  • cultural shock
  • personal well-being
  • recognition of degrees
  • academic terminology
  • communication nuances
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