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Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we feel like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, in today's scenario dressing sense is the major aspect for judging a person personality, but to cope up with
this
 ever-growing trend is not an easy task to accomplish, to which group of people debate, that one should not follow it and wear clothes with which they feel are comfortable. We all should feel confident while wearing an article. To commence with, one should not take up a dress, because society feels that it would enhance their physical appearance, rather it should be an individual decision completely.
For instance
, if a person goes for an interview round
then
, people around them start commenting on what kind of clothes they should be wearing to leave a positive impact on the interviewer, whereas, the in charge of the placement drive is not worried about the dressing sense of the candidate, but the qualification of the applicant must match the requirement of the company.
Moreover
, nowadays the organisation have changed a lot, they do not want the person who can dress well, rather companies look for the candidates who are sound and feels confident about their qualifications. To exemplify, Multinational Company (MNC) like Google and Amazon does not have a dress code for their offices,
in addition
 to
this
, employees are allowed to enter the workplace with any kind of article of clothes that make them feel self-confident at work which generates a healthy environment for work, and we do not see any kind of drawback in these type of ideology of an industry. To summaries, one should feel self-assured while selecting up an article to wear, and not opt for anything
that is
 recommended by others. Freedom for wearing should be encouraged in offices.
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