You have meet and old friend in another city on your last business trip. Now you are going on another business trip in the same city and want to meet him again. Write a letter to your friend and say - Express your excitement about the last meeting. - Give details about your new business trip. - Suggest an arrangement to meet again.

Dear Jay, hope
this
letter finds
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yu
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in radiant health and
best
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of spirits. I am writing to inform you about my
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upcoming
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up coming
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upcoming
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business trip
in
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to
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same
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the same
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city, where we met
last
time
in
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my
work related
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trip. My
last
metting
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meeting
was
owsame
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same
with
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you. Even I can't forget that
time
in my life. Let me explain my situation, My company decided to send me for
next
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business trip
in
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next
month between
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October
3rd to
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October
10th. My stay is in
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wonder hotel. Which is very near to your house and I will be free for one day after finishing my all deals with clients. Would you kindly, able to take
day
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off at that
time
. So we can meet again and spend some quality
of
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time
together. I
also
waana
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wanna
want
join
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my business, so we can
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about
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this
at that golden
time
. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Lovingly, RUSHI
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