Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is the reason? Discuss possible solutions and provide examples.

Nowadays the equilibrium between spending time with family and focusing on career development

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a major concern to parents. In

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essay, I will discuss some reasons that explain that difficulty and

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provide solutions which might solve it. The living costs

such

as house expenses, children’s education and food, has increased drastically in recent years.

As a result

, people feel the obligation to work as many hours as needed amplifying their income and

then

being able to provide a comfortable life to their families.

For instance

, it is quite common even in well-developed countries, parents working at two or more jobs aiming a greater future to their children.

Furthermore

, professionals are becoming more qualified because of technological advancement.

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orkplace is higher than ever before

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for those who are starting new careers and need to prove their competence doing extra work.

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, there are some measures that could be taken to minimize

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Firstly

, adding regulations on companies that not only guarantee a salary for reasonable hours worked

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but providing professional

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during the shift to employees, avoiding extra hours improving them technically. To illustrate that, companies could stipulate range salaries based not on

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uantity of hours, but capabilities and proactivity.

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time shifts should

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solve the problem. Allow the employees making their own schedule, regarding the minimum hours, enables them to organize specific times for work and family.

For example

, parents can conciliate children’s school time or homework with their own jobs, and

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both leisure times to stay together. In conclusion, the high competition in

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and the necessity to improve the average income are some reasons that affect the

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between relatives. There are solutions described above which, if taken, should revert

this

situation.