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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People who live in a country which is located abroad in his homeland can face some difficulties, due to lack of understanding language and society. I partially disagree with
this
 notion. In
this
 essay,I shall put forth my to support my arguments. There are several reasons why I choose life abroad.
Firstly
, almost forty per cent humanity think that without any skill of speaking in a foreign language, they can not keep living in internation republics.
However
, to put in simple I know one of the men who live in Germany approximately a year despatched from India, he had known nothing about the touges but he is survived there and with the time he learned few words and now doing a job in a restaurant. In spite of
this
, alien talked calmly that there are many people who are not able to learn a foreign language even if it takes many years. of course,it depends upon the interest and persisting study. In fact of complications in life, study us to correct. I mean residing more forth than motherland causes serious problems, but it teaches us how to solve issues independently,
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owever culture of the foreign country teaches us different gesture and reapest to other people.Different country has something different meaning of the same gesture. for insane, hand purse gesture meaning in France means I am afraid and in the USA I am not clear To sum up, I prefer to inhabit and aware of a lot about the countries which increase the horizon and gift of the tongue rather than lead to a sedentary lifestyle which
on the contrary
 leads to serious problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Language barrier
  • Miscommunication
  • Isolation
  • Cultural differences
  • Social norms
  • Essential services
  • Employment challenges
  • Social integration
  • Community events
  • Support systems
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