Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian in your letter -describe what you like about the library -say what you don’t like -make suggestions for improvements

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding your request for suggestions to make the library effective. As you mentioned, improvement will be done as per customer's opinion.

Firstly

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, the area is spacious, so need to expand it.

Secondly

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, the room has proper ventilation. There are ample natural light resources.

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, a huge amount of articles and books of all kinds are easily available here.

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, It always takes time for me to find specific materials. It is because of the number of collections

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it is not properly categorized as per field.

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, I sometimes face the struggle to find seats. Lack of computer devices is another problem that I faced here. In order to improve, I would suggest you add more seating arrangements for the users and add more computers.

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, library shelves should be reconstructed in different sections so that books and novels can be placed

accordingly

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. I hope

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information will help in the process of library renovation. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph has a single clear idea to enhance readability and coherence.

logical structure

Using more connectors and transitions between the points can help improve the logical flow of ideas.

greeting and closing

The letter has a proper greeting and closing, making it formal and polite.

complete response

The response addresses all the parts of the task: what you like about the library, issues faced, and suggestions for improvements.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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