Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian in your letter -describe what you like about the library -say what you don’t like -make suggestions for improvements
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding your request for suggestions to make the library effective. As you mentioned, improvement will be done as per customer's opinion.
Firstly
, the area is spacious, so need to expand it. Secondly
, the room has proper ventilation. There are ample natural light resources. Lastly
, a huge amount of articles and books of all kinds are easily available here.
Besides
, It always takes time for me to find specific materials. It is because of the number of collections as well as
it is not properly categorized as per field. Moreover
, I sometimes face the struggle to find seats. Lack of computer devices is another problem that I faced here.
In order to improve, I would suggest you add more seating arrangements for the users and add more computers. Similarly
, library shelves should be reconstructed in different sections so that books and novels can be placed accordingly
.
I hope this
information will help in the process of library renovation.
Yours faithfully,
Harpreet Kaur.Submitted by harpreet291kaur on
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph has a single clear idea to enhance readability and coherence.
logical structure
Using more connectors and transitions between the points can help improve the logical flow of ideas.
greeting and closing
The letter has a proper greeting and closing, making it formal and polite.
complete response
The response addresses all the parts of the task: what you like about the library, issues faced, and suggestions for improvements.