TEENAGERS WHO COMMIT SERIOUS CRIMES, SUCH AS BURGLARY OR MURDER, SHOULD BE TREATED IN THE SAME WAY AS ADULTS WHO COMMIT CRIMES. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION?

Undoubtedly, nowadays juvenile delinquency is on the rise compared to the olden days. Some people hold the opinion that strict

punishment

should be awarded to wrongdoers, without considering whether they are adolescents or adults; whereas, others have conflicting views. Here, in the below essay, I will try to enunciate both the arguments with my own perception.

To begin

with, some people think that in the case awarded sentence for a Juvenile is less compared to the adults for committing similar nature of a

crime

like murder, burglary, kidnapping and scam,

then

definitely criminals would encourage the youngsters to commit a

crime

considering less impact in terms of the

punishment

.

Additionally

, there can be a possibility that to take revenge of some family dispute parents will persuade their kids to commit a

crime

, taking

this

fact in consideration that while

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

awarding the

punishment

some leniency will be provided. By contrast, other people have conflicting views. As per them, there can be a possibility that Juvenile can commit a

crime

after watching

crime based

Add a hyphen

crime-based

show examples

movies or some soap operas without thinking

Verify preposition usage

about

show examples

the after-effects. Apart, from that nowadays, young generation copy their role model lifestyle completely, so they may be under the influence of the eminent personality who had committed the similar nature of a

crime

.

Hence

, taking the stage of impulsiveness, it is important to show some pity while

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

announcing the

punishment

.

In addition

, whenever a

crime

is being committed by an adult, they can repent on their mistakes after completing the jail term, even if they are being awarded a harsh

punishment

;

on the other hand

, if the strict

punishment

is given to teenagers, they may take

this

personally and can commit suicide or start indulging in anti-social activities.

Therefore

, they argue that it is necessary to take in consideration, whether

c

Add an article

the

a

show examples

rime is being committed intentionally or under influence of someone before awarding the

punishment

. To recapitulate, by looking at the above facts, in my viewpoint, it is prominent to consider the severity of a

crime

as well as the exact reason to commit the

crime

. While awarding the

punishment

the criminals of all the age groups must be sentenced equal

punishment

.