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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Government of any
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 should have responsibilities of its citizens without the age discrimination. Few people believe that authority should look after more about elderly people while at the same
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, some say
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ducation of young generation is more important. Today, in
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, in my opinion, the academic development of the upcoming population should more be focused.
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 with, every citizen of the
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 has the expectation from the government, no matter what age groups are they in. At the same
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, government officials undoubtedly balance their resource according to the need of people.
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, medical, health and transportation-related services are more in need of elderly people, therefor authority should issue free passes to senior citizens to avail these benefits. Many people are suffering a lot in their
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 stage of life only because of the scarcity of money. So the state should care about them,
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, the educational program for youngster should be
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 given importance at the same
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, it is commonly said that the more young population any
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 has is called the younger
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 compare to others. Only only the economy of
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ountry depends on the
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 of young age but
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 based on how much educated young people live in
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ountry.
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, as per the one recent research of well-known educationalist Dr Ashokkumar Thakur, India has the highest number of young people living in
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ountry at the same
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 due to unavailabilities of quality
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 most of the young generation looking for higher
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 in abroad which cost lot to the
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 in coming
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ountry must have a good financial budget to promote the educational project for youth. To sum up, the elder should not ignore while learning of young should
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 be taken care of In my perspective, the government needs to have separate departments to cater to the need of elder and
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 experts for the academic upliftment of young people.
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