A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

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Dear Nedina, How are you? I hope you're doing well, I am glad for your invitation to visit your

country

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However

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, previously I

need

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needed

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several of the information that I have to know First of all, can you tell me what kind of items I will gift your mother later as a guest, if she likes souvenirs,

as a result

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, I will try to look for some souvenirs in my

country

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I would like to ask whether activities are fun.

Besides

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, the clothing culture in your

country

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is not suitable for me. that's why

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have to know about living there.

In addition

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, I have heard that many types of food and related to meat.

this

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is very interesting for me and makes me feel strong to visit your

country

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to try some foods that are famous,

such

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apply

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pork, beef and others Thank you so much, I am looking forward to hearing you soon See you soon Levi

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task achievement

Ensure you use proper articles (e.g., 'the information' instead of 'several of the information').

coherence cohesion

Try to avoid abruptness in transitions; link your paragraphs smoothly.

coherence cohesion

Ensure subject-verb agreement to maintain grammatical accuracy (e.g., 'activities are fun' could be more specific as 'activities you enjoy').

task achievement

Great job in establishing a friendly tone which is suitable for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Structured with clear purpose in each paragraph (gift, activities and clothing, food).

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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