A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food
Dear Nedina,
How are you? I hope you're doing well, I am glad for your invitation to visit your
country
. However
, previously I need
several of the information that I have to know
First of all, can you tell me what kind of items I will gift your mother later as a guest, if she likes souvenirs, Wrong verb form
needed
as a result
, I will try to look for some souvenirs in my country
I would like to ask whether activities are fun. Besides
, the clothing culture in your country
is not suitable for me. that's why i
have to know about living there.
Change the capitalization
I
In addition
, I have heard that many types of food and related to meat. this
is very interesting for me and makes me feel strong to visit your country
to try some foods that are famous, such
as,
pork, beef and others
Thank you so much, I am looking forward to hearing you soon
See you soon
LeviRemove the comma
apply
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task achievement
Ensure you use proper articles (e.g., 'the information' instead of 'several of the information').
coherence cohesion
Try to avoid abruptness in transitions; link your paragraphs smoothly.
coherence cohesion
Ensure subject-verb agreement to maintain grammatical accuracy (e.g., 'activities are fun' could be more specific as 'activities you enjoy').
task achievement
Great job in establishing a friendly tone which is suitable for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Structured with clear purpose in each paragraph (gift, activities and clothing, food).