Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the vegetarian and vegan diet has become more popular than it was in the past

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because it is said that consuming only vegetables (and fish,

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products) could improve our health and save the Earth. In

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belief and will give my personal opinion. In today's society, being fit and healthy is the

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that most people wish. To

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purpose, some of them

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to give up eating meat, fish and other animal products and balance their meals with only natural products, vegetables and fruits. They are certain that

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diet is safer, that it

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calories so they can eat more and that it helps our digestion. I

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vegetarian too. Since when I have stopped consuming meat, I feel

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and fulfilled about myself, by seeing my body getting slimmer. Another

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vegan or vegetarian diet is because they want to save animals and the world. A recent survey about animals reported that over 20 billion chickens, 27 billion pigs and 15 billion cows were being killed for our wants of meat

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year, and these trends are forecast double in ten years. In conclusion, the consumption of animal products should be restricted by governments in order to kill

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animals, but it is still impossible to make it come true. I hope that all beings living on the Earth can be treated equally.

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Plant-based diet
Chronic diseases
Greenhouse gas emissions
Deforestation
Water consumption
Mitigate climate change
Natural resources
Animal welfare
Humane and ethical choice
Healthcare costs
Sustainable farming
Legumes
Fruits and vegetables
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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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