In some area of US, a curfew imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the door after the particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

The stages of life is always challenging phases in human life: it’s plays paramount importance role .we generally called turning point of life. One of the turning phase is teenager phase.
This
phase not completely not childish and not completely mature. It is between the satge.
Therefore
, many teenagers unable to decide what is wrong or right may be reason teenagers missed their path and follow abuse . at that
time
, the
government
responsibility has been increased and they take hard decision like
curfew
.
Firstly
,teenagers are in growing stage. if they do any kind of abuse in
this
stage. The
government
has rights to take action for countries better development.
For instance
: In US, many teenagers are going dance bar and cosume drugs.
therefore
,the
government
had decided for night
curfew
. Generally,these situation handle by strike laws and action only.
Secondly
, most of the
time
curfew
does not work due to aggressive behavior of teenagers. Sometimes they get more rouge and do more abuse
such
as rape, drug consumption and many more. That cases, strike rule not control the situation. ultimately, countries faces lots of problem from other countries.
this
oftenly happened in many
time
. In conclusion and my opinion , both view their own pros and cons. many people scarred about
curfew
. In my point of view,
curfew
is not punishment is just strike laws for save our children . the
government
should do research about teenager activity and punish them immediately within in short period of
time
.
This
would help to improve teenage activity.
Submitted by priyabalge on

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