Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in the other city. You mistakenly left a file with important documents at their house. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file, tell them why it is important. ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Dear Rahul, Hope you are doing good. I am writing to tell you about the main documents that I left at your home when I

last

visited for attending a job seminar in your adjacent city.

Last

month when I had visited you due to job schedules, I must say it was

such

a good experience and after so long time. I never expected 3 days visit would turn out to be a short trip. When I went to participate in one of business presentation to another city I got few utmost important documents about the company , which I had to take care of but forgot at your residence. The file contains the budget of

project

Correct article usage

the project

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and other company shares information which is really needed for our valuation of industry.

Also

to mention various

business

Fix the agreement mistake

businesses

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handled by them which is an important deciding factor to buy that company or not. As I mentioned , I would need that file urgently. And I was wondering if you could help me sending that document by speed post, marking it as confidential . That would make sure that documents are kept safe and reach me on time. I would be grateful for your favour and

also

invite you to visit my home town and will go together to a good backpack trip nearby. Cheers, Girish

Submitted by girish.watwani2008 on Fri Sep 11 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

hospitality
gratitude
appreciate
document
important
crucial
business seminar
post
address
costs
safely
quickly
thankful
file
return
by post
appearance
contain
deadlines
cover
express

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