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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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To begin
 with, in the 21st century many things has changed a lot like, various development been happening, education system has changed and various other things too. According to survey by various government organization of a particular country, have stated that many people are choosing or they are more focused towards living alone theseday's as compared to they are living in the past. These type of situation might have caused due to various types of problems or it could be anything. Let's discuss
this
. To start with, in some countries, many people nowaday's are choosing to living alone as compared in the past. These type of situation has various impact on the
person
 if they are living alone, it might be a positive or negative development.
Firstly
 let's talk about positive impact on the people who are living alone,
for example
: - If someone is living alone or living away from the family he or she might can learn new thing or they can develop their mind for their better furture because they have lot's of free time,
secondly
 if a student is living alone in other place they have various thing to do and they can utilize thing time in a good way. kjsgjkdsjkcdsjkcbjkw
On the other hand
, if certain people are choosing to live alone the
also
 might face various negative development too.
For example
: - if someone is living alone and they have lot's of stress due to their workload or other family problem they might started drinking alcohol or do various drugs to relive for sometime, due to
this
 kind of habits they will face certain challanges and lead to bad negative impact on the body. Another thing is
that is
 some
person
 is living alone they might feel lonely and
this
 can lead to a depression problem.
Lastly
, in my opinion, according to me
this
 type of challanges occur in everybody's life but it always depend's on
person
 to
person
 how they are dealing with
this
 kind of problem.
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