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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this situation?

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There are thousands of languages spoken in different parts of the world. Every
country
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 has its own mother tongue,
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 learning all of them is quite hard, but Residing in a different
country
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 requires learning their
language
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 too if not,
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 it can result in some serious and pragmatic problems. In my view, it is definitely true in all aspects.
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 barrier is an extreme problem faced by people living in a foreign
country
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. People with no knowledge about foreign
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 can experience several social hardships in their life. Different institutions and fields are a platform where people from different countries meet and interact, though it is essential to speak and share ideas with the usage of effective
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 skills of that particular place,
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, people might be neglected, boycotted.
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, if a person shifted to another
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 in search of a job, but
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 again could not get one because of
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 issues.
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, he might face some serious financial crisis, which could even badly affect the health of a person.
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, there are some more major practical problems that occur due to
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anguage barrier while living in a foreign
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. Every
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 has its own culture, tradition, so it might be challenging to adapt
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 that society and behave
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 with no knowledge about their
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 of that particular nation. Because of
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ndividual might face difficulty and in some situation misunderstood the people of society.
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, it will not be easy to interact, socialize, with the natives. To sum up,
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anguage barrier is something serious and
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 the person, if not learned.
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