Some people support the development of factory farming and the scientific creation of fruits and vegetables in agriculture, but both the view and give your own opinion.

It is seen that intensive production of
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- products
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almost every
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. People have varied in their opinion. While advocates of industrial farming point out that
this
is essential to meet the increasing demand
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food items on a larger scale, others consider
this
can have huge
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repercussions
on human and nature. On the one hand, supporters of intensive production argue that
this
initiative is to satisfy the hunger of the common people.
In other words
, by following traditional methods of agricultural
techiniques
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techniques
, may not be able to cultivate as required. Being engineered seeds, the eatables become
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tastier and healthier, along with more size and number.
For example
, genetically modified mangos are well known for
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flavour and colour, which are highly demanded globally. Without
this
farming method, many people would have ended in poverty.
On the other hand
, the opponents of the above- mentioned view, opponents think that
this
would cause many health problems to man due to the genetic modifications.
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is because
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these plants may not have the immunity to resist various diseases;
therefore
, it is common to use
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xcessive amount of pesticides and fertilizers. These chemicals can result
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some health issues,
for instance
,
such
as cancer, skin irritation and breathing difficulties. Apart from
this
, which can pollute our environment in many ways, namely, air, water,and soil.
Thus
,
this
group is strongly fighting to cease
this
agriculture practice. In conclusion, even though some agree
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this
production strategy, others say that it is aginst of the natural balance.
However
, by considering all these, I strongly think that though there are negatives
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an be found
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this
method, the benefits are paramount.
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