Many countries on the world are developing their tourism. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, the travel

industry

is developed and promoted all over the world. From my perspective, the benefits that accompany

this

trend are more significant than the drawbacks. On the one hand, the negative effects caused by the expansion of

tourism

cannot be overlooked.

Firstly

,

tourism

could have an adverse impact on the environment. An increasing number of tourists can constantly add pressure to cleaning systems causing waste disposal problem. If

this

waste is disposed of inappropriately, it may damage the area with the toxins,

then

pose a threat to the local’s health.

Secondly

,

this

growing

industry

could bring about the destruction of nature and habitat loss. It is because new areas of land need to be cleared for new hotels and roads to accommodate more tourists.

As a result

, wild animals might lose their natural habitat and be pushed closer to the brink of extinction since they can find a suitable living environment.

On the other hand

,

although

the adverse impact caused by

tourism

is evident, I still think its benefits are more significant. One of the most obvious advantages is that

tourism

can generate a massive amount of wealth.

Thus

, a country could have a more generous budget to invest in other key sectors

such

as medical or education systems.

Therefore

, countries using

tourism

as a source of income could

further

develop and grow. Another benefit of

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ravel

industry

is the growth in the number of job opportunities in hotels and bars that are available for the local people. These jobs do not require many academic qualifications so it can serve as a

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path for the underprivileged who cannot afford formal education. In conclusion, it is true that travel

industry

creates both positive and negative impacts.

However

, I am of opinion that a country can still gain a lot of significant benefits from

this

industry

as long as it is fully aware

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the potential threats.