Only reason to work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is the universal truth that

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money

plays a vital role in our lives.

Thus

, diligent people work hard to earn money

therefore

, They can

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their needs and sustain themselves in modern society. Apparently,

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are

also

few people who

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their jobs and always be passionate and dedicated

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the given task. They focused more on achieving their lives goals rather than monetary terms.

Hence

, My inclination partially agreed with the statement. It can be supported by the following arguments.

To begin

with,

This

is so evident that every individual

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their basic and opulent needs. It can only be fulfilled by remuneration which they get from their work. Due to technology advancement and

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modernisation

modernization

, Life has changed a lot.

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people run after money so that they can buy gadgets,

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luxurious

cars, lavishing homes.

As a result

,

They

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does

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extra shifts, freelancing

accordingly

they paid double. For exemplify, Mostly multinational companies set a monthly target for their employees whom so ever achieved that should get the incentives which

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icing

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on the

cake for them as they already get handsome

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salaries

.

Thus

, Employees put full efforts.

On the other hand

, Some people

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for

c

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ountry and society without showing much concern about monetary benefits. Their property should always be to serve the nation and the civilians. It gives them

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immense satisfaction. Soldiers , Athletes, social workers, painters

they

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works

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for long hours and paid less as

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to

white collar

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workers.

For Instance

, Mother Teresa

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was a social worker and devoted her life to the caring the

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and destitute people. Many times we read the news that Army officials martyr during wars, Still

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youngster

have

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that patriotism they

wants

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to become soldiers despite

of

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having life threats at borders. To recapitulate the essay

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would say even though earning money is the foremost and primary driving force behind many

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people

but still

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there many of them

works

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for

self satisfaction

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