In some countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people rergad this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important learning and taking responsiblities? Write both view and your opinion

There is no doubt that even today, child labour is so evident. Even though

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it is sometimes thought that the young generation would benefit from

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if they start working at their tender age, others consider

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ought to be

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. In my opinion, I firmly believe that the later is correct as

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work may have huge

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repercussions

on one' s life. On the one hand, advocates of recruiting kids for any employment argue that

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may allow them to have

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- experience, which can be an asset for their future career.

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, they can develop skills and that can be utilized when they become adult.

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, in some countries, they encourage children to work in

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job sectors, on the basis of

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evidence.

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exposure may sharpen

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fine motor and brain skills.

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, they could earn some money and use to buy things, which may not be possible

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, opponents of the above- said viewpoint think that exposing the young one to a working atmosphere can be harmful and I support

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is because they may be exploited by their employer by giving minimum wage for their hard work. Apart from

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, kids may encounter dangerous scenarios, which may not be possible

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them to handle.

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, they end up in a working place, where the safety is minimum.

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is the reason, in many developing countries, like India, where employing under 16 year is considered as an offence and penalise those who are responsible for the same. In conclusion, people have

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arious opinion whether is

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to employ kids or not. BY viewing both

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, I personally support to disqualify them to possess for any employment

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until

they reach 18 years.