Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: – describe the problem with the dog – explain why it is important for you to sleep – outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.

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Brown, I am writing to you to bring your attention to a problem that I have been facing for a long time with your puppy at night time. As you are already familiar that your dog started making small detours at night, digging holes in the gardens and often making loud noises at midnight around the neighbourhood. I was awoken by your dog barks

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several times lately and I had been consulted

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doctor who had been prescribed some sleeping pills. Actually, it is noteworthy for me to write

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letter because my exams are coming up

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week and I have to stay later into the night for studying. As of loud noises, I could not be able to concentrate on

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properly so, I am facing a lot of problems. Apart from

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, I won't be able to disturb you once my exams would finish. I would

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be grateful if you could have your dog looked after by another member of your family and try to keep your puppy at home for several weeks. Thank you for taking your time and consideration to read

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issue. Regards, Anu Bala

AnuWed Sep 16 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

noisy
disruptive
affecting sleep
vital
important
well-being
productivity
neighbors
training
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noise-reducing device
barking
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