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As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree with such a procedure? Have you any reservations?

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Living longer has always been a dream we have chased for centuries. Science fiction has pitched various ideas about human cloning and harvesting human parts. These leaps in medical science have narrowed the gap between fiction and reality. While I do support the idea of creating organs, but I do have
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eservation on human cloning and validity of these artificial organs. Ability to create artificial organs can be deemed as a boon to many in dire need of it. Concurrently, cloning humans
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 opens up gateways to preserve great minds which could bolster our future advancements.
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, if visionaries
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 as Newton, Einstien and Picasso would have been alive today, we would be living in a different world, so many unanswered questions would be solved. Man-made organs could
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 save so many young lives and talents who never reached the zenith of their success.
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 advancements always paint the picture of a highly advanced world, but it
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 raises few reservations. Organ donation is a reality since many decades, yet we have failed to achieve a 100% success rate. If the natural organs can fail, can't the artificial organs fall prey to the same consequence? Concurrently, as human cloning could recreate great minds, it could
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 bring back fickle-minded criminals. Not to mention the horde of identity crises it will give rise to. While in fiction,
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 processes elope the real-world question, but in reality, we might have to resolve
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, human cloning is promising, but control measures for
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