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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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The table reveals, the various types of personal details of the employees in the retail and manufacturing industries in one country. Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of female workers are more in retail industries, whereas in manufacturing it is vice versa. There are more married employees in both industries than single. It is important to note that the ratio of men in the manufacturing sector
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, men’ rate is significantly lower in retail rather than in manufacturing. It is 47% compared to 65% respectively. In the case of material status, both industries have a marginal difference. Married employees are more than unmarried. There are only 8% of
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 between them. On the flip side, almost more than half employees in both industries are at age between 28-51. They almost cover 70% in the
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, the workers at 65 above age in the retail are half than the manufacturing. It is 4% and 8% respectively. The retail sector has almost double workers at 16-27 compared to manufacturing.
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