In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is replacing cars. Why is this the case? Which development do you think is better?
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their
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thier
. Today, people Correct your spelling
their
they
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are choose
a city, according to Change the verb form
are choosing
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thier
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their
life style
. The most Correct your spelling
lifestyle
prefer
is, what is road condition, traffic and Change the form of the verb
preferred
convenet
about public access. Correct your spelling
convenient
Becuase
of Correct your spelling
Because
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, some cities are overly Linking Words
croweded
to cars and some cities are concern about environment issueCorrect your spelling
crowded
,
and prefer Remove the comma
apply
a bicycles
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bicycles
a bicycle
instead
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beleved
that its case of Correct your spelling
believe
believed
geographycal
and easy access are metter. Correct your spelling
geographical
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put light on both Change the capitalization
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give my opinion.
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travelled
more to catch up with Change the verb
travel
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the
they
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ar to minimise a travelled time. Add an article
a
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particular
p
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a
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thier
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their
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, even it is far away from that. Linking Words
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lots of miles away from home. The two Change the verb form
is
reason
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reasons
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first
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rime location or Add an article
a
bussiness
area very high and Correct your spelling
business
thats
why they live far away from Correct your spelling
that's
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thier
job area. Correct your spelling
their
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Second
reason is, people prefer to live in Add an article
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p
eace area for Add an article
the
a
relaxe
and enjoy Correct your spelling
relax
lesiure
time with family.
Recently, most Correct your spelling
leisure
of
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apply
c
ities are suffering from pollution. They are Add an article
the
meny
cities , where pollution index for breath is Correct your spelling
many
unacceptable
high for Correct your spelling
unacceptably
humen
. Because of Correct your spelling
human
this
, People are suffering from new Linking Words
deasease
and increase problem in breathing. To cut Correct your spelling
disease
of
with Replace the word
off
this
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dea to Add an article
the
an
reduced
a car and prefer Change the form of the verb
reduce
bycycles
for people health. The people are more Correct your spelling
bicycles
coucious
about Correct your spelling
cautious
conscious
curious
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thier
health. the Correct your spelling
their
scientically
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scientifically
proven
that when you ride Add the auxiliary verb
proved
has proven
bycycles
for Correct your spelling
bicycles
a
hour at every day will Change the article
an
incease
Correct your spelling
increase
a
10 years in life span.
we are facing lots of environment issue and people Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
averege
are reduced Correct your spelling
average
beacuse
of Correct your spelling
because
the
modern development. People are become Remove the article
apply
lasy
and do not care about Correct your spelling
lazy
environment
issue. My point of view is when people are adapt Replace the word
environmental
bycycles
rather Correct your spelling
bicycles
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then
car. The cities Replace the word
than
are become
more Change to the active voice
become
have become
buatiful
and less noise on street. Correct your spelling
beautiful
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dvanced solution to fight with global warming and for better human life.Add an article
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