In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is replacing cars. Why is this the case? Which development do you think is better?

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own value. The city is made from people live into

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a city, according to

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their

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. The most

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is, what is road condition, traffic and

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convenient

about public access.

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, some cities are overly

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crowded

to cars and some cities are concern about environment issue

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and prefer

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bicycles

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instead

of cars. I will

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that its case of

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geographical

and easy access are metter.

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put light on both

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and

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give my opinion. The bigger cities, which has lots of people, they have to

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more to catch up with

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needs and for

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they need

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ar to minimise a travelled time.

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, they are many stores in cities but some people love to shop with

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particular

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erticular shop. So, they go

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their

store to buy

this

, even it is far away from that.

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lots of miles away from home. The two

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for

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,

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is, the cost of living in

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rime location or

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business

area very high and

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that's

why they live far away from

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their

job area.

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reason is, people prefer to live in

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eace area for

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relax

and enjoy

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leisure

time with family. Recently, most

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c

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ities are suffering from pollution. They are

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many

cities , where pollution index for breath is

unacceptable

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high for

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human

. Because of

this

, People are suffering from new

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disease

and increase problem in breathing. To cut

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with

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problem, they are trying to getting

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dea to

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a car and prefer

bycycles

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bicycles

for people health. The people are more

coucious

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cautious

conscious

curious

about

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their

health. the

scientically

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scientifically

proven

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that when you ride

bycycles

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bicycles

for

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hour at every day will

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increase

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10 years in life span. we are facing lots of environment issue and people

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average

are reduced

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of

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modern development. People are become

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lazy

and do not care about

environment

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issue. My point of view is when people are adapt

bycycles

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bicycles

rather

then

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car. The cities

are become

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more

buatiful

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beautiful

and less noise on street.

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is

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dvanced solution to fight with global warming and for better human life.