Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person Write about 150 words. You do not need to write addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in lieu of the article you posted on 12th March 2020 in the Chronicle, about rewarding people who have contributed to society. I would like to nominate
Mr.
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Rajanath Pillai for
this
award, for his splendid work through his Clean Earth Foundation. He embarked on the mission to clean all beaches in Mumbai alone, soon someone posted a video about him and
then
supporters started flowing in.
Consequently
, he started the Clean Earth Foundation, which has almost disposed of 150 Tons of garbage in the past year. His efforts and vision of a beautiful world is the one that we all share, but he was the one who took steps and got his hands dirty. I would like to commend his efforts by donating INR 50,000 and
also
help him set up a website through which more people can register. I hope together we can make the world a better place to live in. Looking forward to hearing back from you with a positive response. Thanks and regards, Om Prakash Mehra.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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