In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

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that a huge amount of money

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to carry out scientific research. It is often paid by private firms

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government institutions. In my

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this

trend has more benefits than any drawbacks.

This

has helped to find solutions to social problems compared to some negatives it might bring. Despite the problems have been mentioned below, the positives are evident in our society.

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,

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studies

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and inventions need a

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amount to complete

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these

this

successfully.

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world renowned

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business firms invest

on

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this

and find remedies for the issues.

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, Telsa is the byproduct of privately funded research, which

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significant, especially, today, we have been severely affected by

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poisonous

fumes from burned fuels.

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cars can

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the carbon footprint and save our planet from drastic climatic changes.

Secondly

,

this

is kind of a financial support to the government since they

could

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not have to spend. Admittedly, there are some bad influences

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occured

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due to

this

, The most obvious one can be

advertisement

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an advertisement

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of the company, the key aim of

funding

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is to have free publicity among their

custumers

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customers

. By doing

this

they may sell their products, which may not be useful for the society.

However

,

this

happens rarely since the authority checks the background of the institution before allowing them to participate

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project. Another point is here to remember that it

is often say

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that the project is just to show their involvement

all

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types of business.Normally, the

studys

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studies

study

are conducted in the

fied

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field

of

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and medical equipment by drug companies

itself

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.

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, many

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have been trained to perform heart valve replacement by St. George valve, which is

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brand of artificial heart valve, but the sections have been closely observed by the authority. In conclusion, even though there are some negatives

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be seen in

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privately funded research, the merits outweigh its

demertis

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demerits

. It will be witnessed more

such

initiatives in the future as well.