Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion

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reservation of animals is becoming a serious concern. Few believe that zoo authorities are harsh on animals and should be

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shut down, while others argue that it creates a safe

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for them. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and express my support for the latter view. On the one hand, people who are of the opinion that zoos are cruel to animals might argue that the authorities are ruthless in terms of looking after them.

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is to say, the zoo may have officials who are not well-trained in dealing with different animals.

For instance

, a tiger has a different diet as compared to a cheetah, but the officials may not focus on that due to lack of knowledge.

As a result

, it could create hardship for the animals residing in zoos and

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result in casualties.

On the other hand

, my view is that zoos create a safe and

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peaceful

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for the animals.

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it could protect them from the uncertain nature of the

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like being hunted.

For example

, a large number of wildlife was lost during a massive

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which engulfed the forest of Melbourne, Australia.

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, the zoos can provide medical benefits like routine checkup and diet program. As a consequence, animals can remain healthy and active. In conclusion,

although

zoos could be held responsible for mistreating animals, I wholeheartedly believe that it creates a habitable and

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pleasant

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for them.