Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believed it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the increasing

problem

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that the world is facing would be global warming. The contributing factors would be the rising pollution from several nations. While some

indivials

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individuals

opine that we should address solutions globally, I believe that providing initiatives within countries would prove productive. On one hand, while

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is important to mitigate actors globally, it would not be as

efective

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effective

as solutions would not be practical fo every country. The rates and types of environmental issues

differs

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from place to place.

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, Indonesia faces the increasing traffic rates that are affecting the air quality whereas

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Singapoe

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Singapore

, there are increasing rates of rubbish

that is

generated by its

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citizens

. By providing guidelines globally, countries could

then

set out preventive measures to counter global warming.

On the other hand

, while

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

133 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

international cooperation
sovereign rights
Paris Agreement
climate change
ocean pollution
collective measures
economic interests
political will
enforcement issues
free-riders
tailor-made solutions
transboundary pollution
resource constraints
global frameworks
national efforts

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