Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believed it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the increasing
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that the world is facing would be global warming. The contributing factors would be the rising pollution from several nations. While some
indivials
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individuals
opine that we should address solutions globally, I believe that providing initiatives within countries would prove productive. On one hand, while
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it
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is important to mitigate actors globally, it would not be as
efective
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effective
as solutions would not be practical fo every country. The rates and types of environmental issues
differs
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from place to place.
For instance
, Indonesia faces the increasing traffic rates that are affecting the air quality whereas
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in
Singapoe
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Singapore
, there are increasing rates of rubbish
that is
generated by its
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citizens
. By providing guidelines globally, countries could
then
set out preventive measures to counter global warming.
On the other hand
, while
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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