You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, • explain what you like about the cafeteria • say what is wrong with it • suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir, I am john studying at your
college
from
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last
two years and I always go to the cafeteria at lunchtime. I really like the menu of our
college
cafe because of the variety of food. I usually y eat a vegetable sandwich from there which is healthy for me and take some coffee along with
this
.
Furthermore
, cleaning is very appreciable, all the table and chairs neat and clean throughout the day.
Staff
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is commendable and gives good service to every customer.
Moreover
, the location is far from
college
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, it takes around 10 minutes to reach over there and I have just 30 minutes for the lunch break. I am coming all the way around the
college
to reach the café.
This
problem is facing by every student at the
college
.
In addition
to
this
, I want to recommend that one door should be inside the
college
so students do not need to go too far to reach there. The door should be accessible from the
college
. Yours sincerely, Manu
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