These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, television-the source of relaxation is contrastingly exhibiting a tremendous quantity of violence.

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is unintentionally impacting the adolescent

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of children. It

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that savagery shown on media is negatively influencing kids. Analysing the depleting cognition health of encephalon to

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rationally, as well as spiking competition to win will prove

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. To commence with, cruelty shown on television breeds negative influence among kids.

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is because it harnesses their cognitive encephalon to

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rationally; thereby, they opt to show anger through the fight.

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, every 8th kid among 10 school kids wrestles with peers over diminutive things, merely to

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the incipient techniques they optically canvassed over TV recently.

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gradually depletes their decision-making faculties and

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transforms into jealousy and rage. Ergo, it can be concluded that violence shown on media is deplorably impacting younger generation. On the

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thought, present elder- generation is less sophisticated in terms of rational cerebrating.

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is mostly because, in good old days, more focus was on building morality, rectitude and tactfulness among kids;

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, today media-movies and comics put pressure on being a triumpher.

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, a couple of decenniums ago, a person was living to head up high whose moral character was veracious and

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without comparisons.

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is majorly impacting the children to compete and victoriously triumph. Conclusively,

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always-victoriously triumphing spirit is

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negatively pressuring the youngsters. To summarize, brutality fights shown on television along with the never-to-fail posture injected through movies, comics vanish the inculpability of a child's encephalon and makes them belligerent, crude, and cruel.

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can only be restructured if parents give full attention to kids upbringing and

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culling the good books, media shows to alimenting their moral characters.