Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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upermarket area in some places is pressing smaller

business

out of the market,

therefore

a section of the population believes that it will be responsible for the

disappearence

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disappearance

of local communities. I totally disagree with that statement because bigger and more complex companies can offer better standards of service and

also

can reduce product prices for the final customer.

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, the considerations about protecting local

business

should not be more valuable than the benefits that free competition brings to

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ocal community. Complex

business

,

such

as Wallmart in

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nited States are responsible not only

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employ local people but

also

to offer a quality service to the public. A research made in 18 small cities in Texas has shown that Wallmart provides 86 per cent of the total items needed in people daily routine. It was

also

published that people

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that buying everything in the same store is way more convenient than buying in different or smaller places. The

second

aspect that should be considered regards the capability of companies not only

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negotiate

larger loads of supplies but

also

manage a more efficient supply chain.

Hence

, they are more likely to have better prices, which will reflect in more affordable items for the final customer.

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Financial Magazine released an article in 2019 that compares the prices of big supermarket chains with

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ocal and smaller

business

. The result presented showed that buying in the local

business

was 21 per cent more expansive than in big supermarket chains. To conclude, I believe that

although

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ompetition is taking small

business

out of the market, it leads to more benefits to the local communities once bigger companies

offers

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a better and more convenient service and lower prices.