The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The recent upsurge in the figures of obese individuals calls for concerns and unfortunately, mounts unnecessary pressure on the health sector. In other to mitigate these challenges certain folks argue that the most effective means to solve

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problem would be to implement more physical exercise into the education system and

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 I strongly agree with because it would eradicate sedentary lifestyle and

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, eliminate diseases associated with being overweight.

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, one of the major challenges faced by the modern world is

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edentary lifestyle because of the advent of technology which is the elementary cause of obesity since all most all calories consumed daily is stored in the body which is

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different from our way of life in the past. A recent study carried out in the UK shows that about 30% of teens are overweight,

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, if more exercise is introduced and practised effectively,

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figure would reduce to 10% by 2050 when

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will be adults

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curtails finances spent on the treatment of the ill-health.

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, being obsessed comes with some other health complications which can be avoided if the masses could control their weight.

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, high blood pressure is an ill-health associated with obesity which is expensive to manage and most times fatal if not handled properly.

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, according to research conducted in the UK, it is evident that some sickness will cease to exist in the nearest future if the

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generation could manage their weight properly. In conclusion, introducing physical education lessons in the school academic calendar is the best way to control

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current stress on the public health system and hopefully

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the resources could be channelled elsewhere to solve the more pressing problem not self-inflicted ones and

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I strongly agree is an effective way to tackle

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issue and ensure more healthy generation.