Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that the adolescent years are the most wonderful time, whilst others say an
adult
life can be more spectacular than that, besides
their responsibility. Therefore
, this
essay will examine these views and provide a conclusion based on writer preference.
The first
perspective is for some that thought that teenage years was the best. It is true because, in this
period, we can enjoy many new things, meet many new friends, and hang out together. It is our nature that makes us feel happy to learn something genuine to us. That is
why some people choose this
. Also
, this
is the term when our parents start to give us some responsibility and treat us like a young adult
. For example
, a 17-year girl has experienced her first
alcoholic drink and her first
drunk moment, which kinda crazy but still exciting and that becomes the most memorable moment when she thinks something that she has never done it before in a stupid way.
The second
belief is for a group of people that pick adult
life is the most incredible moments, despite their responsibilities as a grown-up person. However
, this
is also
true because of the power that we gain when we become old enough. Being an adult
means we can use our own decision and our money to do some indulgence. For example
, when we were a teen, we can not travel to other countries without our parents' permission and of course, their money. Furthermore
, after we work and we are mature enough, we can travel to some places that we like without relying on their money and permission. So, that is
our satisfying moment when we grow up.
In conclusion, although
there is a dispute related to this
matter, I think it depends on people preference. However
, in my honest opinion, I would choose the teenage period as the most unforgettable and happiest times in my life.Submitted by michellina594 on
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