some people think news has no connection to people's lives so then it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, it very much important for each an everyone to read various kind of news and keep them updated about what's happening around them. Meanwhile

on the other hand

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there are some group of people who think that news has no bond between people's lives so they think that it is

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a waste of time to read

newspaper

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instead

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of, they are more focused toward's watching different kinds of news

channel

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or programs

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: - news

channel

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like Times Now, Economic Times and other various news program.

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to begin

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with, news is one of the most important sources to get

information

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about each and every topic which is happening around the world. One can get various kind's of news from newsarticle's , news channels and due to vast development in technology theseday's people can

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gets news from mobile phone application

also

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. One can get various types of news like

information

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related to country's development, scam related issue or it could be related any popular people country. You can find

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type of news in both on

newspaper

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as well as on newscast too.

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, to add on I think that

newspaper

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article provides much more accurate

information

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as compared to news

channel

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because the motive of

newspaper

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is to give proper

information

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and the motive of newschannel is grow their

channel

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's TRP.

Newspaper

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is always filled with various article and you can

also

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find small and very important news on related to people lives like

for example

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: - news related to corruption in which you get to know about various people is related in

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scandel but in television news they don't show the news accurately.

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, to conclude that, I disagree with the statement that news has no connection to people's lives so

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it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs because television news only show's news which will give more TRPs and people like to watch these things, but one should

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read

newspaper

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too.

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some people think news has no connection to people's lives so then it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measure should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

Human activities has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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:In some countries, fast food restaurants and companies give money to schools provided that the schools promote their products to school children. What do you think is the positive and negative of this in the development of children?