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Due to the advancement of technology, the modes of
transportation
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are changing day by day. It has been argued that people should be aware of other modes of
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and stringent rules and regulations need to be applied to avoid
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pollution related
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issues and traffic congestion. I agree with the notion that
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overnment should enhance some laws to eliminate traffic jams and encourage individuals to
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public
transportation
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. The primary reason why people need to be motivated to
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public
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is to avoid the congestion on the roads due to overwhelming of cars. People should be mindful about public vehicles
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as buses, to travel the shorter distances.
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, they can
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bicycles to travel 5 or 6 kilometres, which will keep them healthy as well as safe.
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overnment can motivate people by introducing campaigns and competitions for bicycling
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offering winning prizes to the citizens to encourage them. In
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way, individuals will
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remain healthy and there will be control on traffic jams as well. Another reason why
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ntroduction of specific regulations against car ownership and usage should be there as
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revalence of
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is at starling rate. The emission of
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from
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private vehicles creates air
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and continuous usage could make people deprived of natural resources
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as coal and petroleum.
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results in various
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issues
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diseases.
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, in New Delhi, India has been introduced by
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overnment that odd and even number vehicles must not be seen on the roads regularly
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a huge amount of fine need to be paid.
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these kinds of rules could inhibit people to
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private vehicles at a regular pace. In conclusion, people are unaware of the consequences
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as deprivation of resources and
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overnment could motivate people by introducing campaigns to
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other modes of
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and amending stringent legislation against vehicle registration.

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